The One Section That Will Make or Break Your Tender (And It’s Not What You Think)

When people ask, “What’s the most important section in a tender?” they usually expect one of these:

  • Safeguarding
  • Quality Assurance
  • Mobilisation
  • Workforce

But after reviewing hundreds of social care bids, I can tell you — the section that makes or breaks your tender is the one most providers treat as an afterthought: your understanding of the service.


🧠 Why It Matters More Than You Think

This is often one of the first scored questions. And it’s where commissioners get their first sense of:

  • Do you really get what they need?
  • Have you read the spec… or just skimmed it?
  • Do you know the people, the challenges, the gaps?

Commissioners want to feel understood. Not sold to.


🚨 Common Mistakes

  • Copy-pasting generic phrases: “We will deliver high-quality, person-centred care…”
  • Repeating the spec: “The service must support people with LD and autism…”
  • Jumping to delivery too soon: “Our team will use outcomes-based planning…”

These answers don’t show insight. They show assumption.


✅ What Great Answers Look Like

  • Locally rooted: “We understand that in [borough], transitions from inpatient settings are a key challenge…”
  • Person-centred: “Adults with autism in this area have told us they want more structured social activities.”
  • Gap-aware: “The current service model focuses on crisis response — we believe a proactive approach is needed.”

This is the section where you prove you’ve listened, thought deeply, and planned with empathy.


💬 A Real Commissioner Said:

“If they don’t understand the people and the context, how can I trust them to deliver?”

That’s it. That’s the game.


✍️ How to Improve This Section

  • Read the spec — slowly, more than once.
  • Look at JSNA data, local strategies, service reviews.
  • Include real voices — what do people actually want?
  • Write it before your delivery section. Let understanding shape your model.

This section is more than a warm-up. It’s the moment you earn the reader’s trust.


    Written by Mike Harrison, Founder of Impact Guru Ltd — specialists in bid writing and strategy for social care providers

    Visit impact-guru.co.uk to browse downloadable strategies, method statements, or get in touch about tender support.

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